I am experimenting with using different types of media in my blog this week. Stuff that I know the students enjoy. GIFs, visuals, audio and whatever else I can get to work and might communicate a fun educational message. . .
When grading many history papers, one might find that we
reuse many corrective phrases. It may be more useful to
correct students in a fun expressive way:
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| Your assertion needs to be backed up with specific historical evidence |
Also, there are many events and people in history. Beware the vague pronoun reference (VPR), which will always keep you from accurately describing what you mean. A pronoun should have only one antecedent, the expression or meaning that gives voice to your sentence. Pronouns: he, she, they, we, etc. . .(and the dreaded, it).
The passive form is:
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| Please edit out as many forms of the verb "to be" as possible. |
Oh and also use the Active Voice in historical writing! Here is an example

Look at the above example of passive voice! Oh,
Now look at this example of active voice:

Now that's an active sentence!

Sometimes it is fun to tell a historical perspective with a GIF. . . just for fun.
| The general sentiments of the Puritan elders towards women in the Massachusetts Bay Colony |
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| Everyone knows what went wrong at the Camp David Accords |
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| They didn't dance it out. |





These are great! I love your use of these images and files for your student comments. I agree that they are much more engaging and interesting. I think this would encourage students to look for feedback more frequently. I also think it might make them more interested in adding similar enhancement to their own blog posts.
ReplyDeleteThis is definitely a good way to illustrate active v. passive voice. I think I always wrote in passive voice for my high school essays (I discovered my teachers thought my papers sounded more advanced if I frequently used passive voice, because the papers were "harder" to read.) Then I got to college and the professors made me stop writing that way!
ReplyDeleteExcellent use on how blogs can be informative and entertaining at the same time.
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